Draft 2 of part 1

Draft 2- Swords of the Princess- Plot

Aya escaping her life in effort to find her parents.

 There was a king who was in need of a princess to take over for his queen. He had a son, but he was though unfit for the honer of being called king. So the king went to an orphanarium to find a daughter. His pick was Aya Tsukiko, an orphan whos parents whereabouts were unknown. Her only possession was a picture of her parents. As years past and she grew, she learned to swordfight, and that soon became her second priority. Her first priority was trying to find her parents. This made her different from the other feminins, as she would rather train then try to look better for the guys. As a sideeffect to her training, she knew all the guards, as they were the only ones that liked training. She hung out with them alot, so much that she became to like the lifestyle of a fighter then a princess. She liked the times when she wasnt forced to wear, the stupid girly outfits. Despite this, she still uses ediquiet and calls everyone sir or miss. She slowly started hating the life she lived. Every night she snuck out to the woods, hopeing she would be able to escape her "prison" she called it. Unfortunatly she got caught every night despite her best efforts. However, one night was different, she saw a figure as she was running from the guards. She screams at the top of her lungs right as the guards catch her. The figure only ooks towards her direction, otherwise motionless, screams one last time as the guards pull her away. Hoping that the figure might come to her rescue. But alas, he remained motionless. This doesnt mean he was unaware of what was going on. For while he may look motionless from a distance, he was ordering his little pet to follow her. He stayed still in oder to remain unsuspicious through the guards' eye. As the guards pulled a miserable Aya back to her home, the figure's little pet crawled at a pace that kept the guards in sight. The critter followed the guards and soon approached the castle. From this point, he kept his eye on the girl as she got forced inside. Aya, having been through this routine countless times, headed up to her room with a gloomy face. The critter scaled the walls, easily keeping up without breaking a sweat. Aya went into her room, slammed the door, and ploped on her bed. The critter relentlessly followed as he squeezed under the door and jumped on Aya's bed without making a sound. He sat quietly on the bed and listened to Ayas mumbling about how she wanted to be free. She got up and surveyed the room, sencing someones presence. She scanned her walls,her floor, and then... her bed. She spotted the critter staring at her. Aya puts her arm out, unafraid. The critter took her invitation, and craweled up her arm. Aya lightly pet him, stating that he was a friendly little spider. Aya talked to the spider, even though she thought she was talking to a normal bug. Regardless, she told the spider all her problems, like how she yearned to see her parents, but mainly how she wanted to escape her prison home. After a few hours, Aya retired for the night. She put the spider on the floor, and instinctly knowing whats going on the spider left. The lights in the castle dimmed for the night. The spider made his way back to his master, and started communicating with him. After which, they to went to sleep. The next morning, Aya goes though the tourture of school, but she felt different today... like there was an extra ray of light today. She didnt think much of it though. After a day of stuck up teenagers, crap for lunch, and teachers that nagged her about homework (to busy trying to escape), she finaly returns home. Ofcoarse she didnt stay long, for after she put her bags down, she made a beeline for the woods. And ofcoarse the guards chased her relentlessly. As Aya ran through the woods, she tripped and landed face first. As she started getting up, she turned in fear of the guards catching her. The guards leapped to catch her, but... as the guard has within feet of Aya, there was a howl. This howl was not your average wolf, but the sound was enough to startle the guards for a moment. And a moment was all it took, at the moment the guards turned their heads, a dent the size the guards head was implanted in the guards body, peirceing right through his armor. The attack was not fatal for him, but as the guards turned to see their comrades devistating wound, they were struck one by one. As Aya was watching in confusion, the spider craweled up her arm. She noticed and remembered her friend she made the previous night, and thinking he was magical asked him what was going on. A guard called for imidiate backup, then ordered a charge to Aya. Hey eyes large with fear, screamed for help. A blackwind revealed a figure infront of Aya. He was swinging a flail out to the side the other hand open. He stayed speechless for a moment, then asked a question Aya knew it wasnt directed to her, but heard a clicking sound. After nodding out of satisfaction, he started swing his flail,fast, faster, fast to where it seemed invisable. Then with another startling howl, slammed the flail deep in the earth. This sent a shockwave, that sent the guards, Aya, and himself flying up.He started swinging the flail fast enough to stay up. He grabs Aya, and lands them on a tree. While holding Aya still, he flees the guards by jumping from tree to tree. Finaly, he stoped and layed the starteled Aya down. Aya had seen what he could do, so tryed to keep quite so she wouldnt
piss him off. He smiled gently and introduced himself as Fukachi Kenbu. Fukachi then told her that he learned that she wanted to be free. When she asked him how he, the spider came out of Ayas pocket and crawled over to Fukachi. Fukachi introduced the spider as Monzer, and told her that Monzer was his pet. That he could understand Monzer, and vice-versa. He also says that he saw her running the previous night, and sent Monzer to investigate. Fukachi then started to explain a bit about himself, namely that he was a mercenary up for hire. Then, he told Aya solemly, that if she really wanted to leave her home then she must escape once more, but this time with a few things. She must bring a weapon to defend herself with, a dagger as part of his payment, 100 gold as the other part of his payment, and 2 personal belongings. One that she could give up. With that, Fukachi and Aya made their way back to the castle, but Aya realized that the guards maby still looking for her... They arrive at the edge of the forest where the guards are found, standing firm as if they were expecting them. Aya runs to the guards screaming, with Fukachi comming at her with a flail. Like normal guards, they stepup to protect the kings daughter. Fukachi intentionally starts attacking the guards, while Aya dissappeared into the crowd.After wasteing a few guards with not much more then a few cuts, Fukachi jumps back and smirks. Then as he claims that it was time to step it up, he puts away his big spiky flail, then pulls out a different flail. This flail also had spikes as do most flails, this one however had holes on the tips of the spikes and a latch on the of the ball. With the flail he also took out 4 small rocks and a bottel. He opens the latch, wich contained a hollow inside, and poured some of the liquid
from the bottel in. He also put the rocks in, then grabs some grass from the ground and throws it in, then closes the hatch. He dashes up to one of the guards and starts swinging his flail, jumps up high into the air. At the peak of his jump, he spins his flail much faster, and with a hot blooded battelcry came down on the guard. The flail burst into flames that spewed out of the tips of the flail, right as the flail slammed into the unlucky guard's head. Fukachi gets up, and with black flames in his eyes, shot a very pissed off look. He charged straight into the sea of guards. Meanwhile (while Fukachi while first started having fun) Aya
snuck back into the castle.

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Draft1 of part 1

Draft 1- Swords of the Princess- Plot

Aya escaping her life in effort to find her parents.

   Tired of her life in royality  She disappears into the woods, then gets lost and panics. Thats when she meets Fukashi Kenbu, a mercenary up for hire. Aya tells him whats going on and asks the he take her back to the city. When they get back, she waits till nightfall and sneaks into her house and packs up. She comes out asking Fukachi if he would be her escorter. At this point Fukachi doesnt know what her goal is. But happens to know her father because that was his teacher. People back in the city know shes gone because the king offers a big reward to get her back. So needless to say Fukachi and Aya are attack a couple times. When word gets to the king that Aya has an escorter, a bounty gets placed on him too. This large reward of Aya and Fukachi puts the country in an uproar. When they get to the next city, Aya goes around asking people if they knew where her father could be. After no luck, she rejoins Fukachi. Fukachi, feeling bad for Aya, takes her to a bar for her first time. Fukachi apparently comes to this bar alot, considering the people know him. Aya passes out after driinking too much. Fukachi keeps an eye on her. A friend of Fukachi reconizes her as
 the person who kept asking for her dad, and tells Fukachi what Aya asked him. They end up spending the night in the bar, Fukachi wakes up first and wakes Aya up. They then leave town. While going through the woods Fukachi shows Aya how life in the forest is, showing things like natural foods, poison plants, and animal calls. They camp out in the woods after traveling all day, Fukachi asks Aya about her parents, already knowing where its going to lead. As expected Aya starts talking about her father. Fukachi interupters her for her dads name. Aya says the name, and
about how he was a great swordsman. Fukachi then tells Aya alot about her father until she asks how she knew all of that. He stops, and promises to tell more about him another day. Aya turns in while Fukachi goes into the woods for a bit. He takes out a bow and an arrow, lights the arrow on fire, and shoots it in the air. He hears Aya scream and runs straight to her. She got taken, but he doesnt panic, instead he wakes up Monzer (his pet jumping spider), and puts him where Aya was sleeping for a few seconds. Monzer picks up Ayas scent, Fukachi puts Monzer on his head. Monzer points out which way to go, while Fukachi is running as fast as he can. Finaly a carage becomes within their sight, Fukachi tackles and kills all the men protecting the carage. He looks inside the carage, only Ayas shirt is inside. One of the dying guards laugh and says that, it was a trap to capture them both, that Aya was on her way back to the kingdom. Guards surround Fukachi and start attacking him. He wastes most of them, but gets shot by one. He stops cause of the pain, then gets shot mulitble times. He quietly calls Monzer with the breath he has left. Monzer jumps onto Fukachi and bites him, injecting poison. As soon as soon as a guard tries to step on Monzer, Fukachi gets up with an evil grin. He then gives Monzer a pill from his pocket. All his weapons start floating around Fukachi, then as if they had a mind of their own, start attacking. Monzer grows to the size of a horse, and Fukachi jumps on. They see another carage, but its in the sky. They start
chasing after it, leaving the weapons to kill the rest of the guards. While running for the sky ridden carage, Monzer explains a plan, Fukachi agrees. Monzer jumps onto a rooftop then launches Fukachi into the air. Fukachi grabs the carrage and makes his way inside, finds and takes Aya whos been knocked out. He gets out and gives the signal to Monzer, Monzer jumps and tackles the plane, at the same time Fukachi jumps and land on Monzer. Monzer lands on the plane, crashing it into oblivion. Monzer, Fukachi, and Aya who is still unconscience, head back to the camp site. The weapons surround Fukachi in an effort to protect him, just in case anyothers were to come. Monzer shrinks back to normal and goes into the hole in Fukachis jeans, where he makes his home. Fukachi puts Aya back in her tent, as he did, Aya mumbled. She was dazed but wanted to know what happened. Fukachi just used the excuse that it was a dream. She fell back asleep,as did Fukachie.